Great Poem Matt..i can relate to it..i think the only change it needs is all the spaces between the lines...I loved it..Keep on writin..Love your friend, Joclyn

That was a very beautiful poem..I liked it.

I know how you feal,
And it feels so unreal,
Freestyle off the top of my head,
Just trying to beg,
Beg that specail girl to love you back,
You tell her your love will never lack,
ANd thats something she can always track,
My rhymes really kill,
Cause tha name Don Mills...
Peace

Great poem matty boy