Hurt me

Amazing job. i loved this but it's very sad i love how everything fit together your an amazing writer.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I loved this poem! It was so good I loved the flow and the imagery it gave me. You are definitly going on my favorites list lol. 5/5

Great poem. Keep up the good work. I really liked this poem.5/5

O.o

Aww hunny. You don't wanna die. I'm sure you don't even wanna be hurt like this. It would be crucial and brutal. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be here. =)

The poem was great. I liked the flow of it. But the rhymes to me seemed a little cliche. No offense to you or anything, but I think you should try to expand your rhyming schemes. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I could have sworn I already read and commented this poem but it alllowed me to vote again, so great job! I loved it, it was so good, very different but all the same awesome!