Comments : Beautiful Girl: Part 5 (With alternate ending!!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    *swats at tears* I don't know what to say poet... kristen... it was beautiful. I loved both endings 4 different reasons. u really do rock at writing i'm so proud of u! *hugs* c? I gave u a 5! I loved it that much! Keep writing hun cause ur awesome.... catch u around! *grins* xx oo })i({ how awesome is my butterfly!!! })i({

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    *claps* Fantastic Amazing Job

    When the girl made her speech,
    the only thing she had to say,
    was, "Without this man's love and compassion,
    I wouldn't be here today."

    I dont know why but i love that Stanza...Excellent Job PV
    5/5
    ~The Broken Man~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Kristen!!! ur comments almost made me cry. That's the cry of my heart that these little dittys might actually give somebody a smile and a... I duno... but yea... thanks hun *hugs* so where's some more poems? *winks* lol... I have a new one... check it out! *grins* *hugs u tightly* catch u round! Ruthie xoxo.... did u read my post on the philly thingy?

  • 18 years ago

    by brady haupt

    Once again you are awesome... I cant really say anything else becuase its mostly been said. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    *too many tears to whipe away* the second ending.... omg just brilliant, part 1-5 were all beautifull writting darlin. im speechless, such a heartfelt and... ugh no words to describe...