by ShadowDancer Feb 20, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Fickle and unpredictable is the child of Spring |
Welli cant really comment this since i have already// haha (CheRRy) |
Beautifully written, loved the vivid descriptions.. nice work!! |
Fabulous, perfected once again. |
by Sole
That poem paints such a picture! I'm really very impressed! |
This Poem Is Very, Very Well Written and Very Fun And East To Read. It Flows Tremendously Well And Portrays A Wickedly Cool Message. I Think That The Seasons Being Called Children Brought Me Another Idea. It Would Be Cool If You Wrote About Their Mother (( Mother Nature )) In Maybe This Or Another Poem... A Sequel Perhaps? I Also Like dThis Poem Because It's Very Different Than Many Other Poems On Here. |