I could feel the emotion amongst this poem and the description within the poem was well put. |
Very beautiful. i adored it, as i do all ur poems. i feel my comments are getting repeptitive, however that is unavoidable when they are all perfect. congrats, |
This is really good, well done. I must say the season's are pretty popular topic...I even wrote one, but yours tops it...Lol. |
This Poem Is Very, Very Well Written and Very Fun And East To Read. It Flows Tremendously Well And Portrays A Wickedly Cool Message. I Think That The Seasons Being Called Children Brought Me Another Idea. It Would Be Cool If You Wrote About Their Mother (( Mother Nature )) In Maybe This Or Another Poem... A Sequel Perhaps? I Also Like dThis Poem Because It's Very Different Than Many Other Poems On Here. |
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That poem paints such a picture! I'm really very impressed! |
Fabulous, perfected once again. |
Beautifully written, loved the vivid descriptions.. nice work!! |
Welli cant really comment this since i have already// haha (CheRRy) |