Its not so bad, the rhyming wasnt brilliant but i feel it was well written because you gpot out the anger, the sadness when writing this.

well done
Love Tara xxx

I love you Sabrina...talk to me sometime. i miss you -xx

love,
sam

Hey 5/5....its not bad at all.......poems dont have to rhyme......they just have to make sence and have emotion. i think u did an awsum job wit this poem and it doesnt suck :).

keep writing.....

sonam