This is awesome dear!
very heartfelt just like ur other poems.

excellent job....5/5

Bharti

I read this poem of yours this morning. I was a bit too short on time to write a comment. But I kept thinking about this poem. I can actually relate to it.

So here I am, read it over, and writing my comment ghehe
Loved this very much. Once again your heart is speaking. Hmm.. I'm really IN the poem right now, feeling it, seeing it.. wow.. you really have the ability to take me into your world. Which is amazing.

Erm.. ghehe nothing else to say I guess? It's just briljant hun =) I like the title aswel, but I'm not pro.. so I don't know ghehe

Thank you very much for your comment, I changed my profile, from "no emails" to "yes emails =)" I think you should be able to contact me. Feel free to do so =) And also feel free to not haha

Erm.. I guess that's all I have to say right now =)

Love you thissssssss much =)
-xxx-

Very good poem, i really like it. thanks for commenting on my poem, i love ur style. all my love xxxxxxxxxx

Hey darl an em0ti0nal piece very t0uhing vert wekk written

Aww this is beautiful, i can relate to it so much the first verse made my jaw drop cause its like exactly what im feeling and thinking aww, wonderful hun,xxoo

Hey darl i n0 i c0mmented um in answer t0 ur questi0n, me n harry have been g0in 0ut nearly 10 m0nths.

This poem emanates true loss. it beautifully portrays the sweetness and sadness of goodbye. the title is perfect as your poetry, rare and true.

Hey babe....i miss you so much i have so much to tell y0o...i will send you a email saying my home phone number and call me k babe? i miss you so much i need y0o s0 bad...please i w0nna c y0o!! i luv y0o...

I wouldn't know what to call it either. Haha. I know it is a good poem though. Great job. And...I actually can help you this time. Yay!
Capitalize your I's. Lol.

Anyways...yeah good poem blah blah blah yadi yadi yah.

Keep up the good work.

I wish you wrote more often

Hey, this is gr8.. i especially lykd ur rhyme.. and u had v powerful emotion goin on there
i gave it a 5
hope ur ok
take care
Nouna

Hey this is a very good poem i like how u write

Tha title doesnt really matter kuz tha poem is wha people should b readin...5/5

That was really good i like it a lot

Hey huni
that was reli gr8
totally loved it
inspired me reli
keep it up
much lov
N3mA x0x0x0x0x0

WAY good!! i love it!! hang in there you will get through it!! great use of words!! the feelings in the poem come alive!!! comment back if you would!! i'd like to know what you think!

Hi There!!
M glad to read ur poem after such a long time, wonder how we lost track, well this is an amazing poem dear and i kust liked it a lot.

great work
all the best and take care
5/5

Good poem... I can identify with your emotion

This was wonderful hun loved it alotttt!!!! i hope that evertything works out for you, and hope your ok. but i know exactly how the person you wrote this for feels. its very hard to forget the pain that the person is going through. so hang in there hun, everything will get better. anways awsome job, keep it up. 5/5
~lilia~

That was sad...but very heartfelt...i was amazed by your feelings in every line...

innocent crybaby*

Hey, love your poem and the title is perfect, the title is what caught my eye and got me to read it. Nice job really love it.

peace