Yeah. i see what you mean, it's total crap...NOT! love, you really, really need to take pride in you writing, especially when it's as good as this. i mean seriously, look at the creativity in each stanza, in each rhyme, in each line and word. it's great. you write so creativly and intelligently. the way you exressed your passion and thoughts exceptional, and the way the poem travelled was wonderfully captivating. once again my love, you have succeeded in a fantasticly written poem...and if i hear any more of this 'i don't like it. it's crap' then i'm going to have to do someting drastic...like shoot you...or at least doosh you in your head, lol.

Brad xx

P.S. you probably knew this was coming, so i'm glad i didn't disappoint you...I LOVE YOU

4 some1 hu dnt believe in God, u made some really strong biblical references, it shows that you actually do think about what ur writing. i really liked: "Where you may realise the beauty of creation,
You may find without anger and pain,
That your spirit is restored and your soul born again" this part was beautiful cos in the here and now we dont realise the small things in life. and the image i get from the last part, is somewhere where total tranquility reigns cos nowadays ppl r killin eachova. very thougtful poem. loved it 5/5

Hey darl i really liked this 0ne. a t0uching piece. beautifully written. i really liked h0w uve written this. keep em c0ming

l0ve always d0ra

5/5
not much more needs to be said,
you've shown much talent in this one poem
excellence is yours.
~Emma

Its refreshing to find people out there who think like you. You have brought a smile to the end of my day. Thank you.