Comments : Your my everything

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece very well written keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Aww, such a sweet poem :) Isn't it lovely when you're truly in love with someone? And sometimes it's hard to tell people you love them - but 'Love will find a way' :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan

    Nice poem. I like the way you've devited the lines. it gives it a diferent kind of flow.