Comments : Geology Almost

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I found this intriguing to say the least. It's unlike any love poem I've ever read, but still conveys the same sentiments. Simply magnificent~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    I must say that the mention of pesto made me smile. If only reference to a kilt were also involved it would have been awesome :)

    What I take away as the message in this piece is that it is the things you come to miss when a loved one is gone, those things that make them familiar, like their cooking and the way they went through their everyday lives. Again, I feel pressumptious acting like I know what you mean. Your poetry is so multi dimensional that it would be for anyone to act like they were 100% sure of its meaning.

    Plain, everyday things remind you of the people you love and then lose because that is what made them special. It's about those little daily reminders that you can't get away from.

    Excellent.