Remember Me Always

Nice great piece. no really i loved it i can so tell you have lots of love for this guy. and it is hard to get over some one but love and broken hearts is wat makes ppl strong sometimes, teaching lessons to those who are really caring and easily drown down by love. but if there was a ten out of ten it would be 10/10 but for now its 5/5 and thats to all your peices honey and one day the right man will appear someday. =)

Its short but good I must add you as my favorites

Awww short but sweet. Blissful.

take care, lis

I thought it was really good. It has a lot of love for your friend in it. Great job!
5/5
Cayce xx

I's a really nice poem, probably belongs more in friendship, but one thing that took away from your nice words, and you had nice words, were the exclaimation points which scream the final word, shattering the calm illusion the rest of the poem presented.