I wish my friendships could last 4 ever........i like ur poem

Hey hunny thats lovely, well done. you need to write more really enjoyed them all 5/5 look after your self babes x x x

I thought that it is very good. I think it would be alot easier to read and would look better if you actually put it into a structure, you know? Just my opionion though! Keep it up.

Amanda I Love you

Devon

Aww.. that was cute.. but it would look alot easier to read if it was in lik.. poem form.. hehe.. keep writing! i love your poems! :)
jessy

Have to agree with the other comments, it'd be much easier to read if you'd break it up! But all the same a great read. Short but sweet; not really much more that you could say really! Nice work, 5/5 x

I's a really nice poem, probably belongs more in friendship, but one thing that took away from your nice words, and you had nice words, were the exclaimation points which scream the final word, shattering the calm illusion the rest of the poem presented.

I thought it was really good. It has a lot of love for your friend in it. Great job!
5/5
Cayce xx

Awww short but sweet. Blissful.

take care, lis

Its short but good I must add you as my favorites

Nice great piece. no really i loved it i can so tell you have lots of love for this guy. and it is hard to get over some one but love and broken hearts is wat makes ppl strong sometimes, teaching lessons to those who are really caring and easily drown down by love. but if there was a ten out of ten it would be 10/10 but for now its 5/5 and thats to all your peices honey and one day the right man will appear someday. =)