Wow this is really good... it flowed well and the ending just pulled it all together... i honestly liked it and its very original! keep it up! i am very impressed!

sammie

Wow an exellent poem! i love it! it flows beautifuly! well done!! the twist at the end was amazing. a great read!!

Ruby

Very nicely done, with a surprise ending keep up the good work

Brilliant! I love the meaning here so much and such a fantastic ending(i'm running out of adjectives here)
Well Done!

All the Best

That nicely done sad tought.

Hey please don't break cigarette in two...i cant see anyone disrespecting it..lol.lol

another great poem indeed, hv to read ur other poems too and soon will do.

all the best and take care

Omg, i thought you were talking about your wife or something... dang, you had me going... i love suspenseful poems. Hotness. 5/5

Fantastic poem, great job keep writing and take care hun sarah x

This was a great poem sure did not expect the ending though! lol...I can understand it very well a mean addiction to give up. Great work!

Wow awesome write very unexpected.