Hi
im an angel
i read ur quotes
i think i understand wats goin on
this guy broke up with u rite...for a damn slu+...
and you say he loved u...and you say u did too...
heres my say
you mightve
but he never did
cos if he did he wudnt ever hav done that
and YOU DO NOT UNDER ANY BLUDDY CIRCUMSTANCE deserve wat he did to you.
and that quote abt him callin u beautiful and holding hands in front of frnds....its probably an article he read in some book or website....how to make girls feel loved...or...how do you know tht a guy loves u....and he applied it.
damn smartass.
forget him, babe
youre way better
i know its super hard...and youre prolly contradicting every statement ive said in ur head...but WHAT ARE U GONNA DO THINKIN BOUT HIM? youre gonna forget him sometime or the other rite? so why not now...tht much less pain...
crank up some music
call some friends over...
have fun
b|tch abt him
and if u get a chance...apply this infamous quote

he broke my heart...so i broke his jaw ;)
take care
dhaval
(maybe we can be friends...leave a comment on my poems to tell me abt all this stuff n the poems maybe lol thanks cya)

Its good i like it i gave it a 5 very good

O man.
i know EXACTLY how u feel.
u wanna know where it went wrong,
you'd do anything to fix it.
or even just to understand it.

great poem, though.
keep it up && stay strong.
here if u wanna talk....

I liked the flow of this... consider one little thing... take out "at that moment". Great write though... keep up the good work!

Hey i like your poems, this is the second one i read, i'll try to read them all. And thanks for commenting my poem (hello stranger) it means a lot.