Night walker re-write

For i am a night-walker i walk among the living,
i have thirst that will never be satisfied.
I crave the one thing that i hold most precious.
When the sun comes i must hide. for i can sleep for over centuries.
i must treasure the the mortal side of me for without it i am an empty thing and yes i have no soul.
i do not live. for this is the curse my punishment
i have sinned i deserve this so i must go and hunt.
so at night you wonder what it is like to be me for
i will show you that its not as cool as u think it will be.
it's a cruse it's not fair to be dead to the world
at night you'r not save when you walk into my world