Hatred (Rictameter)

by HOLLY ARMER   Feb 20, 2006


Hatred
brewed in evil
blackening innocence
marring souls of the purest white
wreaking havoc upon society
always there beneath the surface
conjuring shadows of
diabolic
hatred

**Rictameter~

A 9 line poetry form. The 1st and the last line are the same and the syllable count is as follows: -

Line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9
Line 2 - 4 syllables
Line 3 - 6 syllables
Line 4 - 8 syllables
Line 5 - 10 syllables
Line 6 - 8 syllables
Line 7 - 6 syllables
Line 8 - 4 syllables
Line 9 - 2 syllables - mirror line 1

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautiful once again. i like the way you use words and brew them into heady concoctions - each time with a difference!

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Hi Holly

    Thanks for your continued support of my writings. I just want to let you know, I'm rubbish at commenting on yours. I write soppy, dreamy, rhyming crud...and you write poems. All these nonets, richtawhatsits and dictaaphones are way over my head, i couldn't write a proper poem to save my life.

    I'd like to say, "Wow, great poem, it inspired me" but all i really feel is "Damn! I'm so jealous of her!".

    which is a compliment i guess.

    best of luck to you Holly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is so powerful, awesome work!

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    As always a great poem..good job..joc aka jocey

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