As always a great poem..good job..joc aka jocey

This is so powerful, awesome work!

Hi Holly

Thanks for your continued support of my writings. I just want to let you know, I'm rubbish at commenting on yours. I write soppy, dreamy, rhyming crud...and you write poems. All these nonets, richtawhatsits and dictaaphones are way over my head, i couldn't write a proper poem to save my life.

I'd like to say, "Wow, great poem, it inspired me" but all i really feel is "Damn! I'm so jealous of her!".

which is a compliment i guess.

best of luck to you Holly.

Beautiful once again. i like the way you use words and brew them into heady concoctions - each time with a difference!

shobhana