Last Breath

by Elizabeth   Feb 20, 2006


Im laying in this bed. And I hear your voice whisper my name. Im screaming your name in my head, but my lips won\'t move to warn you that Im almost dead. Now just before I pass I hear you gasp \"I love you.\" I try to hold on and tell you the truth. That I will still love you even after my death. And here it is my love my one last breath.

~Lizzy

*yeah I know this is more along the lines of prose, but I would still appreciate your comments none the less*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    WOW!!!!!!!!!! This was a very moving, touching poem! good work! I wish i had written it lol!