Excellent poem. It's so short yet contains so much emotions.

I recently painted a picture of Mrs. King herself, this poem would go nicely with it.

I apologize for not being about to critique it, but I like it the way it is.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Great Job.
Its different type of poem but its great I like it alot. keep up the great work

~Juls~