The Prison of My Mind

by Hina   Feb 20, 2006


Manipulation
--
A Modest beginning
Toward mental
Incognito, along with
The scorching
Of one's mind.
Turns twilight into a Horizon
Of blood
We cannot find

Needles in veins
Crying, laughing, screaming
The gain of pain
Remains unknown to
Those of us
Who turn the other way

For Miss Keys
I was a prisoner
Of words
But tonight,
Im in a jail
Awaiting jurisdiction
A fair trial
Maybe some agony
Maybe some prejudice
For words
Misinterpreted

Let the lock
BURST
With no access to a key
Instead,
Access toward
The righteousness
Of God
From one humble servant,
To you
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*Again, hard to understand if you are a Novice.~

Copyright Hina Ali H.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I really liked this one. I think my favorite part of this poem was this:

    Im in a jail
    Awaiting jurisdiction
    A fair trial
    Maybe some agony
    Maybe some prejudice
    For words
    Misinterpreted

    That said a lot to me. Keep up the good work because you are really talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Well done poem. The flow I think could be better but over all this piece that you wrote was great. Keep up the great work.

    ~Juls~

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, that was a nice read! As you had previously mentioned your poems are not for novices, and that is true. I definately enjoyed your upper level poems, it was a nice breath of fresh air. Brillant poem love. I liked the way you spaced you poem, the different sections you divided it into with each section having something new to add to the poem. Nice work!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Very descriptive and beautiful writting I love that is sets itself apart from the usual cliche poems that are often on this site. Also you managed to create a good poem without rhymeing good job

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