You Don't See
by Lovemylove Feb 20, 2006
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Your always bringing me down, you don't understand me because you don't see how much I love you. I gave up everything for you because I wanted to, not because you asked me to. You treat me like crap, and expect to get me back. This time its different you see, because you wont be able to get me back. Because I'm tired of your bull crap, you never ask how I feel you just treat me how you think I need to be treated. Now is the time for you to learn what you don't see. |
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18 years ago
by tiffany
YOU HAVE A VERY RARE GIFT WIT WRITING. NOT ALL PEOPLE HAVE IT AND I THINK YOU USE YOUR WRITING AS AN OUTLET JUST AS I DO. I ADMIRE YOUR WORK AND THIS POEM BLEW ME AWAY LITERALLY. IT'S SHORT, DIRECT AND HEART-FELT. I LOVED IT, HONESTLY. IF YOU EVER NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO FEEL FREE TO WRITE ME/ EMAIL ME AT BURKTIF@BOYNEFALLS.ORG
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18 years ago
by TinyDancer46
Wow, you just put into words exactly how I'm feeling about someone right now. Great writing, hun, and keep up the good work
