by NicholasRyan Feb 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I hate the way you treat me, |
by PnKhOt8
Hey..I really like this poem! I think that it is well written and i just have to say this..all moms are bithes..my mom is too but you have to stay strong.. just ignore all the stupid and mean things she does and think about something happy and it'll get u thro.. Trust me..running to the blade doesnt make the pain go away..it just brings more..Its happened to me..So yeah just hang in there and give it the best u got!! cause u r worth it!! : ) *KC* |
by KJD
A very nice poem, by the looks of it, by a amazing writer... don't give up on life ok??? YOu will make it through if you try! I know it gets hard, and that razor, or knife, or glass seems to take all the pain away, but it doesn't! I know that, and hopefully you are reading this now, and know it too! Keep your head up high ok, you hear! Don't let your life fall apart because of someone! Live for you, and be you! I wish you the best in your life! Keep on writing! |
Um......wow. It very well written, and ure feelings are very well portrayed. Though hate is a very strong word, b ut there your feelings and ure poems are really good. so 5/5! |