Wow! This is a great poem!!! It really talks about the issues in life today! My poem New Birth talks about that too! You really reminded me of it, and this was real good! 5/5 Keep up the GREAT writing!

I realy liked it. its something that others can relate too and not just the person that wrote it or in this case the person you wrote it for.

I really enjoy reading your poem...Racism is something that i cannot understand...why people judge other people just because de way they look? Its sad...but anyway keep writing poems like that ;)