Comments : Sonnet I: Steering Wheel

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    The tormented skies within get clearer,
    And a renaissance does my mind invite.
    Everchanging as the wheels beneath me,
    I'll rebuild my life out of this debris.

    i like this part of the poem it describes so much in so little excellent job

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Wow! great poem, very descriptive! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Your words bring forth so many images that I have to slow down as I read. It's so easy for me to be swept away into deeper thought. Great write!