Comments : Broken

  • 18 years ago

    by The Spirit of Ash

    I loved this poem ! it's sad but very good :) 5/5

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy Jr.

    Look don't let yourself down over some guy remember there are more fish in the sea even though i lost my girl the same way well it dont matter you just keep writting and dont let the better of ya get to you.