by kaitlynn Feb 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
If you love me then why are you still filled with those thoughts of her.I love you but if you love her then we done because she isn't me & never can be so leave me.........GOOD-BYE |
The way you wrote this was very hard to read and could be cleaned up to what I have below. Your punctuation and grammar was off, I felt like this was very rushed. Next time use spell-check and take a bit to look over your piece. Also, try writing in stanza form, it will be much better to read. |