This Feeling_~*

by FASHIONISTA   Feb 21, 2006


There is this feeling I can't explain,
This feeling I have for you.
It feels deep like the ocean.

This feeling it gives me butterflies,
When ever i think of you.
Make me happy, so I smile.

I think of you every chance I get,
Every second, day and night.
All day I'm dreaming of you.

I found out the words i feel for you,
This feeling contains three words.
Those three words are "I Love You".

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl beautifully written a t0uching piece. great j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Vanessa, I see from your profile that you are only 12 ....(lucky girl....lol) I am very impressed with this poem for someone of your age....very impressive indeed. I think when something is written from the heart there is no good nor bad...just beautiful.
    Keep up the writing , you will go far .
    I will be looking forward to more of your poetry M'dear .

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Hey Venessa,

    That was so cute... I must say that you are overflowing with talent... you are young, so just let time do the magic... you have a long way to go and many experiences will come your way... They'll give you the inspiration to write... But for now, this was wonderful.. keep writing...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by TrueLovesVictim

    Very nice...i think they would make better quotes but i like it

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