Very nice...i think they would make better quotes but i like it

Hey Venessa,

That was so cute... I must say that you are overflowing with talent... you are young, so just let time do the magic... you have a long way to go and many experiences will come your way... They'll give you the inspiration to write... But for now, this was wonderful.. keep writing...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Vanessa, I see from your profile that you are only 12 ....(lucky girl....lol) I am very impressed with this poem for someone of your age....very impressive indeed. I think when something is written from the heart there is no good nor bad...just beautiful.
Keep up the writing , you will go far .
I will be looking forward to more of your poetry M'dear .

Hey darl beautifully written a t0uching piece. great j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!

l0ve always d0ra