Wow this peom was really really good!! awesome job!!

One of the best poem from ur end
This is really amazing

I just loved this stanza the most, though the complete poem was a killer

From then on each night she would start her journey
The only companion being her shadow
In search of another man who would color her heart red
And the feeling of love he would show

ultimate work dear

all the best and take care
5/5

U knw i can read ur poems and not get sick of reading them coz they r jus too good. 5/5. very impressive.

love
sonam

Awesome job dear..........
no doubt ur poems are fantastic.....5/5

Bharti

This I really liked :)
Oh yeah thanks For the advice :)
I think I can make a better decision now :)

Wow this is intense. i really enjoyed it. the story is beautifully melancholy and it reminds me of this one painting i saw. but in the painting she was more of a seductress. i was actually thinking about writing a poem about it. i think i will eventually....ANYWAY (i dont have ADD, not at all) um yeah your poem is great, its fast paced and engaging. nice job!

Among all the poem I read this one is one of my favorite poem...It's so sad and really meaningful

keep it up

Very enjoyable read..well written....keep up the good work....5/5 please read "Arabian sands" "gifts of sorrow" "my tears" vote and comment thank you very much