2 Minutes

by Leonta   Feb 21, 2006


30 seconds pass by i told you i loved u but you ignored i don't know what it is about you i like best is it your eyes, the beautiful smile that breaks me down inside
its 1 minute and the words is still not right please tell me how you feel i know we were meant to be but i see you still love someone else
1 minute and 30 seconds is here but our love is slowly fading why cant i show you what love means how much you mean to me that we deserve to be
2 minutes is here but it seems our love is not strong so I'll just cry why i listen to our favorite song

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  • 18 years ago

    by keirstin

    BABE DATS A GREAT POEM I REALLY LIKE IT...UR A AWESOME WRITER DON'T STOP

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    WOW this is reli gwd for a beginner,ma first one was bad n yrs is lyk a pros lol...well yeh loved it...love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Its good for a beginner...i think you need to change up ur format a bit...and then it would flow better..good job..JOc

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Very interesting i would like to say. It gives out a point though i mean the poem needed a little more power to it i mean hey your a beginner so don't worry about it. But i would have to say it gave out a point that it only takes 2 minutes to make something change your life or something to make that happen. You did an amazing job though i would have to say for a beginner. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by elmozbabiigurl7

    Aww its sooo cute

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