Comments : The Smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Freakfall

    Wow really good i can relate to this great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by :. bri-bri .:

    I cried reading this because this is what i do everyday but ur good and it was a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Wow that's some powerful stuff, I really like it ALOT i can totally relate, I've written some stuff like that but I didn't think it was that great so I didn't put it on here, I usually just write poems about love...

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    Wow, this is a really good poem.
    I can relate to the poem really well.
    I give it a 5/5.
    Excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    Aw that was really sad. I cant help but feel bad when a nice girl gets sad cause some jerk leaves her. but this time, I was the one who lost :( but I loved your poem, good stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by homyfookingosh

    I feel so emotional now! lol
    this is my fave. i havent even read the others yet.
    its still my fave! *YAY*