Good structure!
Luff it.
Gem xx *5*

This is great..i kno the feeling...plz comment back if u have time...*PL*

Oh hunni, im speechless this poem is great, with every word i read i could hear your pain, i have to let you know im here for you sweetie. If you ever need to talk im here to talk to you. ewwwww....it stinks my sister and my cousin are making grape juice with real grapes and they put gummy bears in them. lol. sorry i just had to say that. well thank you so much for the comment it means more than i can explain. well chiklet i gotta go. you stay strong.

~Hurting Inside~

Hay thanx for the comment your writing is great i can relate to alot of it, wat part of aussie r u from
wb
suicide-angel

:) nothing i can say....