You've expressed the emotions so deeply, it's amazing. great work on this one!

shobhana

I have been standing on the edge
and i have been falling forever
hoping to hit reality someday
but these nightmares don't leave me ever

Fall only for love and run for your sweet dreams, you'll see the nightmares are gone forever.

Amazing poem indeed, what else to say? Loved it very much.

Lots of Love
Princess

Hey Nitin,

wow... em, I am at a lack of words... your words very well painted an image in the reader's mind... it's a job well done... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Again awesome poem. ur emotions are so deep........
very heart touching....5/5

Bharti

Wow, this is so powerful and sad! Amazing write, a beautiful choice of words that makes it unique! I love it, excellent poem!

I love you style of writing and i feel it's close to mine in a way don know how. anyhow, all the best

Wishes

Hey old friend :), I'm glad to see you're still writing. I'm sorry it's been so long, but I've been so busy. If my head wasn't attached to me, I'd probably be neglecting that too. *sigh*. But anyway...
Great poem, I wish I could comment on your love poems because I really enjoyed those aswell - but it keeps signing me out still. So I just wanted to say that you're amazing and always have been. I'll talk toyou later, and until then, keep blessing us readers with your writes :)

In all honestly I absolutely loved the words that you have done. That is a great job. Sorry but there's nothing else to say other than that was well written.
~Faith

Wow, that was really deep, I like it, really sad too, perfect imagery, beautiful. Thanks for your comment on my poem! 5/5
Helen

This was a really good one too. I can relate to the feelings expressed in it as well. Thankyou for the nice comment on my wall. Hope you get your love back soon
god bless
Renee

I like these dark kind of pomes of yours i give them5/5.

Nitin
What a wonderful job on this poem. The sadness and pain can be felt in every word you have penned.

Blank paper of my memories
fall from my hands to where they belong
and blend with my tears
which have been floating there for so long

Love the way you began this piece. The feelings were carried so well to the end.
Great!
Love Cindy