Comments : Leaving Behind

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    Leaving behind everything I have come to hate
    and the fact that they all bitter sting deep.
    Leaving behind the pain, torture and agony
    and taking peace in one ending goal, death keep.

    That was really good Ben. I mean it...For some reason I liked this one a lot better than the other one I commented on. Im sorry my poems dont appease to you..but thanks for you honest opinion anyways...Great job:D

    ~Always4You~