How beautiful Nitin! (i spelt it right this time, didn't I???!!) such a nice thing to say - i do hope for you this dream is true and will always be!

good luck with love!

shobhana

Well well well.... where do I start?

just one more wish if he could hear
if i could stay one night with you
and watch you sleep my dear

if i could keep my palm under your head
caress you hair all night long
and make you sleep on my dream bed

Well, I am with you on this wish. I'll raise my hands and pray as well that this wish of yours come true. Such a simple yet genuinely sweet wish you have made, how can it not come true.
Keep your smile close to your heart, but keep the reason for your smile closer!

Lots of Love
Princess

So... Mr. Mongia is finally walking on the road of love... Dream big, because dreams do come true... very sweet poem, full of hope and happiness....

My fav. stanza-

With this new faith inside me
I look above to the creator and pray
To not make this present a memory

Fabulous... see, it's not soo bad to write a love poem... you're good at this too..
5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Great job Nitin!
no doubt, ur love poems are too awesome. i love reading them too. 5/5

take care
Bharti

Revisiting, I just loved this poem. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece. :-)

Love
Princess

5/5 this one was really good, kinnda cute =P I loved it. keep up the good work hun
xox
Kristen

This is realy great. Very sweet too.
It must be how everyone feels when they're in love.

Lovely poem dude! totally awesome! 5/5 for sure!!

Thanks for commenting on mine :-)

Ali

Hey Congrats!!! I'm so happy to see this one make it to the top as its my personal favorite.

Luv
Michelle

......i dont think i have read a better poem than this one. no words can be enough to appreciate this work. its absolutely marvellous! m sure you have loads of fans.....i just joined the club!

This piece was amazing and beautiful... it was so touching... there arent many poems on this site that are about loving, usually about broken hearts, and this is one of my favorites.... i'm glad i chose to read it. if i could give it a 10/5 i would...

I love this poem i absoultely love it fantastic!!!!!!!!

Aww, so sweet, but not over the top, your feelings for this person come off as tangible and deep. I liked the sincerity of it all and how sentimental but completely uncliched it sounds. Keep it up :)

Wow what a great poem

Wow what a great poem

You have a uniqueness about your poetry i admire. It simple but yet at the same time complex. Well written. I look forward to reading more
5/5

In this life which was so full of chaos
you came tearing all clouds apart
and made me forget who i really was

fantastic word use....i really enjoyed reading this....5/5......its just so beautiful......hope all ur wishes do come true.

takecare
sonam

This was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read in my life. Keep up the good work.
god bless
Renee

Nitin
This is breath takingly beautiful. How your love you have in your heart shines here. I wish you had found this love.

just one more wish if he could hear
if i could stay one night with you
and watch you sleep my dear

if i could keep my palm under your head
caress you hair all night long
and make you sleep on my dream bed

I was so touched by these two stanzas they moved me to tears.. I wish...Oh how I wish...to have just one more night with my love.....I miss him so much.
Excellent job yaar.
Love Cindy