Comments : Dun Take Me 4 Granted

  • I absolutely loved the ending of it..

    In the midst of everyone here..

    In the midst of my busy days..

    In the midst of my busy schedule..

    In the midst of my busy life..

    Dont take me for granted.

    So many people take me for granted I think it is going to make my head explode one day.

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    I tried to break this one down to the lines that reflect the struggle i am dealing with. but they all do. its truely amazing how someone else can write what could be your own thoughts. thanks :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This piece also reminds me of what I'm going through right now. It's amazing what positive change a person can make in your life, and then the next, they ask for space. Pssh. The truth is hard to swallow.

    <3