by Always4You Feb 21, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Deep down inside |
by Jen
This was... interesting. my favorite lines were "I'm not as good as I should be, I can't keep up with what's expected"... because i know how it feels to feel that way... to never feel good enough... when all the girls around are so much prettier and my sister is so much smarter, ya know? i can definately feel the emotion and the point your trying to create in this poem. But seriously... you should love yourself, love who you are who cares how smooth your skin is or who does/doesnt except you, your you and thats all you need to be. -jen- |
5/5 Great poem! u did a very good writing it. |