by Always4You Feb 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
No one helps her out; |
This opeice is well written, good flow and structure and great content. |
I agree w/ u. that it seems as though its not quite finished. but i really did love it. especvially: |
by Tara Kay
I like this poem, well done |
Very sad, but well written..my only suggestion again is the same..Try to let your words flow..dont force em..theres no need for it..Let the rhythm take the words dont force it |