Comments : Here I am again

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Consider revising the 10th line. it shouldnt be "deeps", nevertheless, beautifully done.

    5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeff

    Have been okay.Thanks to both of you.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This one is wonderfully written! love the idea of the line - came with wind and love.

    great writing
    shobhana