Please love me

by DANI   Feb 21, 2006


The sky is coming down,
the rain is slashing earth wards,
i feel I'm going to drown,
I'm living on without you,
life without a cause,
press your remote controller,
please take me off pause,
these dark clouds up above me,
circle round and round,
getting lower and lower,
pressing to the ground,
will it open up beneath me?,
gather me safe and warm,
never release me,
to the growing storm,
spinning round and round now,
faster now it turns,
faster beats my heart now,
how the panic burns,
i cannot go on,
empty space on front and side,
looking wildly round me,
nowhere left to hide,
i feel your always watching,
waiting for me to fall,
gloating on indifference,
feeling nothing at all...

-please love me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Yes this is a great poem, props to you! xD very good, keep it up...i like the rhyimg aswell :P

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Awesome poem, Very descriptive. Keep up the great work.
    Bec xx