Don't woory it is good. anyways keep writing.
take care

Don't woory it is good. anyways keep writing.
take care

Wow that is really good. I like how you blended the events of the poem together. if that made sense. lol. awesome job

I like this poem, its really good. check out some of mine if you'd like! Take care.

Good job. its a really nice poem

I think your poem is really good too. I like the rythum and ryhme sceam.