I don't get it.

by James Nguyen   Feb 21, 2006


I don't get it... when people
have the perfect girl they let them go like
a piece of a wrapper...
People search love for all their lives and
never found "the one."
I was one of these people..
Yes I'm young but I know when
I'm in love..
When you find your love..
cherish it, hang on to it...
celebrate it..
I found my love...
I want to cherish it as much as
possible..
I will do anything to hang on it...
I want to celebrate my love with
my special someone..
I will never set my love for you aside
so our love will hopefully will
never be lost.
I love you Robyn
I will show and tell you everyday.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hewwo.
    Sweet poem indeed.
    I really enjoyed the beginning about letting love fly by like a peice of wrapper, very creative and nice.

    I liked how in the poem you celebrated the fact you lfound love and I think if you broke it into a steadyer flow it would be a much more easy read.

    But all in all, the ending was very sweet and I enjoyed the poem.

    Young Love,so nice =]

    Well done.
    Keep it up.
    And Try a nice new flow next time =P

    Lisa.x

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