Hey...keep your head up you kno...my situation is close to yours(my ex wants to be single so he can get thru skool) well idk how close it is...i kno how hard it is for this to happen....keep your head up sweet guy....great poem and ill be happy for you to just read my poems...its ok if you cant comment on them thats ok i understand....

~!Sandra!~

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!

Vrry deep..love it and i am sry you are hurting but so proud ot kno that u realize its an obstacle God has placed in your life..and from now on its all abotu trusting him!! good luck and keep writn.!! I can see your passion wit ever word you write!!

LISSA :)

I am so sorry!!! I hope ya'll get back together!! Never the less this was still another wonderful poem! 5/5! I hope everything works out!

Wow. This poem is very good. I am so impressed. I only wish I could express my feelings as well as you do. I could totally relate to this poem. I only wish I had a man who loved me half of what you obviously feel for her. Always stay true to your feelings :)