by N J Thornton Feb 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love has an element of envy; |
Well, all i can say is wow. |
by Oceansoul
Really well done, , really liked it, |
by Bridgette
This is a very good poem, its short, but you really made it work. I love the meaning behind it. You did a very wonderful job on this, your word usage was really good and the flow and rhythm of it was really good also. Great job on this! |
by Laura
Your use of words is very effective. |
Was a good poem and flowed well, altho i had to read it a couple of times to understand it... |