by Bella Feb 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He will never know what hid behind her eyes, Tales of pain, deception, and lies. |
by Joe Holland
That is fantastic! loved the 'Sweet Suicide.' part at the end. Just seemed so abrupt. Exellent |
This is extremely good..ur right..i do like this one...i love sad and depressing poems |
by DevilWithin
Hey hun that was a really good poem i loved it you write really awesome. xoxo Rach |
by Bella
Thanks for the compliment!! I've written a couple more too. Thanks again!!! |
by Izzie
I defintly got goose bumps from this one while I was reading it. Really awesome job! I'll be coming back to read yours. Beautiful job on this one really. Keep up the good work sweetheart. |