How ... Without You

I love this poem! I can relate , especially to the ending....how we do still find joy in life even after a loss or heartbreak. 5/5

Brilliant! See what you think of some of my poems - please...
Keep up the good work
love and light

I don't know where to begin.The title fits so perfectly.But it is the sadness, the emotion, that I can so relate to, I mean this really touched me deeply. it mirrors so much of my own feelings, a piece of something I'm going through.Choked me up for a moment.This is one of my favorite things you've written and I'm sure many can really relate, but it really did affect me deeply.I love the last line-just a hint of ambiguity, yet mostly a touch of hope-just the bit of hope and inspiration to offset the pain and sadness and show us things pass, and eventually as the despair passes we discover maybe we can smile again, someday.I love this.

Hows iwthout answers. an amazing poem . nature and human's element. it was great

all the best,
wishes

Encahnting. the repetition of "without you" gives the poem a sence of such exquisit longing. the references to nature where very descriptive. well done

Ruby