Absolutely breath taking!!! I loved this poem. Great job indeed. Loved the way you ended it. 5/5

Not a problem. I was trying to show that a frown could turn into a smile, even with his passing. The penny that we had tossed, I had found, and the memories brought about a smile, without him. Corny, but there have been days that I've been smiling and that in itself is hard to accept, as I didn't think I would ever smile again, yet I'm starting to.

I LOVE this poem. It's gives me *good* chills. Really, I'm very impressed. I loved the "How the music has changed
without you" and the "How my frown turns into a smile
without you".... EXCELLENT work. The rhythm & flow is nice, as well. Overall great poetry.
As always~ Kate

Wonderful write, excellent!!!

Hey great poem. It's a little uneven at times, and breaks off from the flow sometimes. But what I believe to be the meaning is awesome and strong. When I was reading this poem I was fully awake. It's awesome Keep up the good work, I love how your imagery.

Oh, so incredible! I mean...Wow!!

Hmmm i love it. very very good . especially the last few stanzas....."growing from the drop of a single tear" and the turn around into hope at the end from the hollowness before. awesome imagery and wording. awesome

Hey darl a t0uching piece great use 0f w0rds. em0ti0n in this 0ne. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!

l0ve always d0ra

Wow, so beautiful & xtremely unique poem.
Its really so good to see sadness in such a different way.

Right in my fav list mam.

all the best and take care

Encahnting. the repetition of "without you" gives the poem a sence of such exquisit longing. the references to nature where very descriptive. well done

Ruby

Hows iwthout answers. an amazing poem . nature and human's element. it was great

all the best,
wishes

I don't know where to begin.The title fits so perfectly.But it is the sadness, the emotion, that I can so relate to, I mean this really touched me deeply. it mirrors so much of my own feelings, a piece of something I'm going through.Choked me up for a moment.This is one of my favorite things you've written and I'm sure many can really relate, but it really did affect me deeply.I love the last line-just a hint of ambiguity, yet mostly a touch of hope-just the bit of hope and inspiration to offset the pain and sadness and show us things pass, and eventually as the despair passes we discover maybe we can smile again, someday.I love this.

Brilliant! See what you think of some of my poems - please...
Keep up the good work
love and light

I love this poem! I can relate , especially to the ending....how we do still find joy in life even after a loss or heartbreak. 5/5