Guy Thoughts; Random Doodling

by TJ   Feb 22, 2006


Me and my friend was bored in science so we started randomly doodling about the girls in our class.

*NOTE* 10JN is our class room

You have been warned.

Josie's hair is actually let down OMG!
She has hardout foundation
enough to supply a nation

sian\'s sister has black toe nails
in the winter it sometime hails

There is something cold and black
behind her smile
She\'s standing on an overpass
In a miracle mile...

Not original,
im sure Abi is aboriginal
Do you think poem is continual?

I don\'t know we\'ll have to see,
Sian\'s smile used to fill me with glee
Until she rejected me (LOL)

A pill to make her dumb,
A Pill to make her numb,
A pill to make anybody else (her new life)
BUt all the drugs in this world
Won\'t save her from herself.

Melissa\'s pretty fast, but her winning stuff is in the past.
She\'s got blonde hair aswell,
That\'s why her computer (and sadly..) IS A DELL!
Marilyn Manson will rest in hell

My spleen is burning with a desire i cannot control,
I gave sian my heart and she chucked it away... lol

Oh my god all the girls are so tight...
I know Timothy, but they do have human rights...

Because it\'s 10JN world...
And you are drained of your colours...
You used to love yourselves,
You used to love one another

OK! It\'s true, it\'s true, i believe you,
all those girls... I\'VE TRIED, love life, it\'s OVER, it\'s THROUGH.

Ahh... the smell of mint just like a window tint. (lol?)

We are in science, we are doing a practical now,
how we ever liked those girls...?

HOW? HOW? HOW?

By Tim J, Brendan J with Inspiration from Ben J and watched over by Matty J

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  • Ha,ha,lol
    this poem made me laugh alot......
    lmao.....
    this was really funny.........
    vrey funny....
    very funny........
    ha,ha,lmao.......

  • 18 years ago

    by TJ

    Thanks all, we DEFINATELY had fun writing it!

    TJ

  • 18 years ago

    by TJ

    No probs, thanks guys, wrote another today; called "beauty" it's about a girl i treasured, but when i asked her out; i was sadly rejected... :'( oh well it happens..?

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Hhahaa... i loved it... it's good to see that people are having fun with poetry... (as that's very important)...
    hoping to read more from you...

    much love,
    ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Funny very funny i like the twist.......4/5