I LOVED your poem! Definatly the last stanza. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to read more!

Wow, great poem, it's very sweet and romantic, it's like you took my feelings for my b/f and wrote them out, i really liked this poem a lot, it was really, really good, 5/5

I love this poem really sweet and so happy made me smile!!! well done :D
XX ally xx

Though I know we live far apart,
But i still want to take the chance,
To endure, with you, this never ending romance.

my favorite line
5/5

This piece reflects your ability to use descriptive grammar as evident in line 14.

The flow and the word choice is nice. Keep it up dear

Tc
Fsams

This one is good. its not my fave lol but it is just as good. i love your writting style.. keep it up. im adding you to my faves.. i hope to read more.