I loved this poem too! I loved the way you used the tears to symbolize something in your life.

Omg! man...well I should say...gurl!...this is awasome..I understand it...keep writing your awsome n thanxs for that one comment:D

Wow - a lot of emotion, thanks for the tip about my writing and i will take that on board - i try to write many different types of poetry and you've given me another challenge - thankyou oh and back on topic: i really enjoyed this poem - it showed that life has many questions which cant be answered including why are we here. keep writing and smiling =) 5/5 =)

Reaaly, really emotional, i liked this poem a lot, and i can understand it because i've been there before, 5/5, this poem is powerful, but yet a lot of people can relate to it

Dear the content of this piece is great. I would only suggest you to keep the poem in stanzas so that It will have a beautiful structure and the reader will be prompted to read. :) This poem is also good

Tc
Fsams

Nicely done. How emotive, indeed. It's sad to note how others live without knowing the real purpose and truth for a happy living. Emotions were relatively poignant. A fine effort, nevertheless.

Take care,
Marian

Again, amazing portrayl of emotions. You really have a way of grabbing the reader, pulling them in and making them feel it. 5/5

marcella